I Am Your W Sun in Our 67 (MASTER1)

Melodic Pop with Synthwave touch and Previous School’s Influenced

2 Comments

Song feedback

  1. Hi Gregory and Fiora – I’m commenting here on both this instrumental and the song Waking Up Every Day in Your Bed Again I got the email about. In both cases, the music is a melodic well-crafted EDM track so good job on that. If you produced these tracks, they show some skill. However, it’s really hard for me to make out the lyrics on the song because the vocals are a bit low and the singer (Fiora?) is hard to understand, so I would redo the vocal and make sure the lyrics are understandable. Also, since I don’t know your family’s story, I can’t comment on what you said in your message about making your family story into a movie and a soundtrack.

    1. Hello Jeff , We hope you’re doing marvelously well today , Thank you for your comment , advices and appreciation , vocals are not from Fiora in this song , Producing is our Team work , Reason I would appreciate we could meet in Vidéo for we can tell you more about our Family , this is a Love and Care Story with a Painful development , in the way we could make this movie out it should become a well end for the Movie , and the most Sunny New start for us and Our Families , more the Story can be identifying the attention of the viewer and listener , My Gratitude requesting you can consider my request with your Highest conscience Jeff , Sincère Salutations of hope and prayers