Hi Joey this is another well-constructed poppy alternative song. Chorus is a bit catchier than the other song for me, although still not great melodically. The lyrics are pretty vivid although the subject matter about how “plastic” and fake LA is has been done many times before. And again the production is fine but not special. On the whole this is another good effort and you should keep going with your writing.
Hi Joey this is another well-constructed poppy alternative song. Chorus is a bit catchier than the other song for me, although still not great melodically. The lyrics are pretty vivid although the subject matter about how “plastic” and fake LA is has been done many times before. And again the production is fine but not special. On the whole this is another good effort and you should keep going with your writing.