This is a well-structured song. The lyrics are too simple however, even for a song with young subject matter. I think you could really benefit from working on your songwriting craft with other writers. Are you close to Nashville? That would be the best place to connect with working writers. You have some good instincts but your writing definitely needs development.
This is a well-structured song. The lyrics are too simple however, even for a song with young subject matter. I think you could really benefit from working on your songwriting craft with other writers. Are you close to Nashville? That would be the best place to connect with working writers. You have some good instincts but your writing definitely needs development.
Thank you for your feedback! I actually do not live in Nashville. I would love the chance to write with other writers though!